Structure of the Opinion Essay:
- Introduction – introduces the topic and state your point of view clearly
- Body - consists of two or three paragraphs each presenting a separate viewpoint supported by reasons/examples
- Conclusion – summarizes/restates your opinion using different words
Useful LanguageТо express opinion: I believe, In my opinion, I think, In my view, I strongly believe, I see it, It seems to me (that), As far as I am concerned, I am (not) convinced that..., In my opinion/view …My opinion is that …, I (firmly) believe …, I (definitely) feel/think that, I am inclined to believe that …… То list points: In the first place, first of all, to start with, Firstly, to begin with То add more points: what is more, another major reason, also, furthermore, moreover, in addition to this/that, besides, apart from this, not to mention the fact that То introduce contrasting viewpoints: It is argued that, People argue that, There are people who oppose, Contrary to what most people believe, As opposed to the above ideas To introduce examples: for example, for instance, such as, in particular, especially To conclude: To sum up, All in all, All things considered, Taking everything into account.
Shopping has replaced many other activities that people used to choose as their hobby. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Sample Answer:
It is widely known that shopping has become a leisure activity rather than a need. There are many reasons that have led people to choose shopping as a pursuing hobby. While some think this may have a negative development, others consider this trend a positive aspect.
To start with, large shopping malls are attractive and popular source of recreational activity. For example, teenagers gather in shopping centres during weekends to go to the cinema, share a meal or just window shopping. Another aspect to consider is that a sedentary lifestyle is replacing some other sports or free time activities for many families.
While there is nothing wrong in shopping, it cannot be denied that changing social habits requires offering alternative options such as sport competitions or creative art workshops, which can be organized by institutions. On the other hand, participating in exciting, free, cultural activities might eventually help reduce consumerism.
To conclude, shopping is essential and inevitable part of our daily lives. Nevertheless, it should be replaced as a hobby for other healthy activities. Perhaps, these way new habits for young people can be settled, which, in my opinion, is a positive development.
https://quizlet.com/nz/514030838/c13-unit-3-consumerism-speaking-questions-flash-cards/
TOPICS:
Consumer Behavior & Psychology
The Ethics of Urgency: Are Cyber Monday's limited-time deals a form of manipulation designed to encourage impulsive spending?
Is "Buy Nothing Day," which is concurrent with Black Friday, a necessary protest against excessive consumerism, and should more people participate on Cyber Monday?
Do retailers inflate original prices before Cyber Monday to make discounts seem better than they actually are?
Can the highly promoted, 24/7 access of online shopping events like Cyber Monday contribute to unhealthy spending habits or online shopping addiction?
Economic & Business Impact
How does the dominance of major retailers during Cyber Monday affect small, local, or independent online businesses?
With Black Friday expanding online, is there still a need for a dedicated "Cyber Monday," or have the two merged into a single "Cyber Week"?
Does the massive volume of shipping and packaging generated by Cyber Monday sales have an unacceptable environmental cost?
Social & Ethical Issues
Are consumers trading their personal data and privacy for the convenience and discounts offered on Cyber Monday?
Has the focus on sales events like Cyber Monday and Black Friday overshadowed the original, more meaningful aspects of the holiday season?
People buy things they don’t need and/or can’t afford
Shopping has replaced many other activities that people used to choose as their hobby. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Sample Answer:
It is widely known that shopping has become a leisure activity rather than a need. There are many reasons that have led people to choose shopping as a pursuing hobby. While some think this may have a negative development, others consider this trend a positive aspect.
To start with, large shopping malls are attractive and popular source of recreational activity. For example, teenagers gather in shopping centres during weekends to go to the cinema, share a meal or just window shopping. Another aspect to consider is that a sedentary lifestyle is replacing some other sports or free time activities for many families.
While there is nothing wrong in shopping, it cannot be denied that changing social habits requires offering alternative options such as sport competitions or creative art workshops, which can be organized by institutions. On the other hand, participating in exciting, free, cultural activities might eventually help reduce consumerism.
To conclude, shopping is essential and inevitable part of our daily lives. Nevertheless, it should be replaced as a hobby for other healthy activities. Perhaps, these way new habits for young people can be settled, which, in my opinion, is a positive development.
https://quizlet.com/nz/514030838/c13-unit-3-consumerism-speaking-questions-flash-cards/
TOPICS:
Consumer Behavior & Psychology
The Ethics of Urgency: Are Cyber Monday's limited-time deals a form of manipulation designed to encourage impulsive spending?
Is "Buy Nothing Day," which is concurrent with Black Friday, a necessary protest against excessive consumerism, and should more people participate on Cyber Monday?
Do retailers inflate original prices before Cyber Monday to make discounts seem better than they actually are?
Can the highly promoted, 24/7 access of online shopping events like Cyber Monday contribute to unhealthy spending habits or online shopping addiction?
Economic & Business Impact
How does the dominance of major retailers during Cyber Monday affect small, local, or independent online businesses?
With Black Friday expanding online, is there still a need for a dedicated "Cyber Monday," or have the two merged into a single "Cyber Week"?
Does the massive volume of shipping and packaging generated by Cyber Monday sales have an unacceptable environmental cost?
Social & Ethical Issues
Are consumers trading their personal data and privacy for the convenience and discounts offered on Cyber Monday?
Has the focus on sales events like Cyber Monday and Black Friday overshadowed the original, more meaningful aspects of the holiday season?
People buy things they don’t need and/or can’t afford
What is Black Friday?
Black Friday is the day after the American holiday of Thanksgiving, which is celebrated on the fourth Thursday of November. Because it’s a holiday in the United States, it has long been a popular day for consumers to start shopping for Christmas. In the 1980s, big retailers started to offer discounts and bargains on this day, and it has become more and more popular. In the USA, people spend billions of dollars between Black Friday and Cyber Monday (the Monday after Black Friday, when online retailers offer discounts). The idea of Black Friday has also spread around the world. Many countries, including the UK and Canada, also hold Black Friday sales. In parts of the Middle East, the same idea is called ‘White Friday’, as the colour white has more positive cultural associations.
Is Black Friday out of control?
Black Friday is the day after the American holiday of Thanksgiving, which is celebrated on the fourth Thursday of November. Because it’s a holiday in the United States, it has long been a popular day for consumers to start shopping for Christmas. In the 1980s, big retailers started to offer discounts and bargains on this day, and it has become more and more popular. In the USA, people spend billions of dollars between Black Friday and Cyber Monday (the Monday after Black Friday, when online retailers offer discounts). The idea of Black Friday has also spread around the world. Many countries, including the UK and Canada, also hold Black Friday sales. In parts of the Middle East, the same idea is called ‘White Friday’, as the colour white has more positive cultural associations.
Is Black Friday out of control?
Many of us enjoy getting a bargain, but some people think that Black Friday encourages us to buy things we don’t really need or can’t afford. Some critics also say that Black Friday is difficult for small shopkeepers because they can’t offer the same big discounts as large companies, especially now that big shops start their sales earlier and continue them for several weeks. There is also growing concern about the effects of consumerism on the planet.
What’s the alternative to Black Friday?
Many of us enjoy getting a bargain, but some people think that Black Friday encourages us to buy things we don’t really need or can’t afford. Some critics also say that Black Friday is difficult for small shopkeepers because they can’t offer the same big discounts as large companies, especially now that big shops start their sales earlier and continue them for several weeks. There is also growing concern about the effects of consumerism on the planet.
What’s the alternative to Black Friday?
Instead of taking the opportunity to buy as much as possible on Black Friday, you could do the opposite and buy absolutely nothing. Movements like ‘Buy Nothing Day’ and ‘Green Friday’ encourage people to support charities or local communities instead of shopping. Since 1997, Buy Nothing Day has been held on the same day as Black Friday. The rules are simple. Just don’t buy anything at all for 24 hours. Many people are surprised how difficult this actually is. The aim is to make people think more about their spending and to make better decisions about what they buy and where they buy it from.
Ethical spending
Instead of taking the opportunity to buy as much as possible on Black Friday, you could do the opposite and buy absolutely nothing. Movements like ‘Buy Nothing Day’ and ‘Green Friday’ encourage people to support charities or local communities instead of shopping. Since 1997, Buy Nothing Day has been held on the same day as Black Friday. The rules are simple. Just don’t buy anything at all for 24 hours. Many people are surprised how difficult this actually is. The aim is to make people think more about their spending and to make better decisions about what they buy and where they buy it from.
Ethical spending
As well as spending less and not buying unnecessary items, Buy Nothing Day aims to raise awareness of how to be a more ethical consumer. For example, you can avoid buying ‘fast fashion’, that is, very cheap clothes that are worn a few times before being thrown away. Or you could decide not to automatically upgrade your mobile at the end of a contract. These kinds of decisions can help to protect the environment as well as saving you money.
What else can you do on Buy Nothing Day?
As well as spending less and not buying unnecessary items, Buy Nothing Day aims to raise awareness of how to be a more ethical consumer. For example, you can avoid buying ‘fast fashion’, that is, very cheap clothes that are worn a few times before being thrown away. Or you could decide not to automatically upgrade your mobile at the end of a contract. These kinds of decisions can help to protect the environment as well as saving you money.
What else can you do on Buy Nothing Day?
Some people carry out protests at shopping centres. Others avoid the shops completely and go for a walk in nature instead. Another alternative, the Buy Nothing Coat Exchange, is an idea that is spreading. People donate winter coats throughout November, and anyone who needs one can come and take one on Buy Nothing Day.
Paragraph outline: Examples:
Expressions and linking words:
Some people carry out protests at shopping centres. Others avoid the shops completely and go for a walk in nature instead. Another alternative, the Buy Nothing Coat Exchange, is an idea that is spreading. People donate winter coats throughout November, and anyone who needs one can come and take one on Buy Nothing Day.
| Personal opinion: | In my opinion/view, To my mind, To my way of thinking, I am convinced that, It strikes me that, It is my firm belief that, I am inclined to believe that, It seems to me that. As far as I am concerned, I think that the economic recession of the previous decade was foreseeable. |
| To list advantages and disadvantages: | One advantage of, Another advantage of, One other advantage of, A further advantage of, The main advantage of, The greatest advantage of.The first advantage of riding a motorbike in a large metropolis is that of not getting caught in major congestion. |
| To list points: | Firstly, First of all, In the first place, Secondly, Thirdly, Finally. To start/begin with, we have to address the inadequacies within the education system before we can tackle unemployment fully. |
| To add more points to the same topic: | What is more, Furthermore, Apart from this/that, In addition (to this), Moreover, Besides (this),… not to mention the fact that your choice of career is a fundamental decision which will influence the rest of your life. Not only is your choice of career a fundamental decision, but it is also one that will influence the rest of your life.Your choice of career is both a fundamental decision and something that will influence the rest of your life. |
| To refer to other sources: | With reference to, According to the latest scientific research, the use of mobile phones can be damaging to one's health in the long run. |
| To emphasise a point: | Indeed, Naturally, Clearly, Obviously, Of course, Needless to say, the scheme was hound to fail due to insufficient funds. |
| To give examples: | For instance, For example, by establishing day-care centres across the country, working mothers can he encouraged to resume their careers. By providing incentives such as, like day-care centres working mothers are encouraged to resume their careers. If working mothers are to resume their careers then the provision of incentives particularly, in particular, especially day-care centres is essential. |
| To state other people's opinion: | It is popularly believed that, People often claim that, It is often alleged that, Some people argue that, Many argue that, Most people feel that, Some people point out that wealth will bring happiness. Contrary to popular belief, wealth does not necessarily bring happiness. |
| To conclude: | Finally, Lastly, All in all, Taking everything into account/consideration, On the whole, All things considered, In conclusion, On balance, For the above mentioned reasons, Therefore I feel that, To sum up, it is unlikely that there will be peace in all the countries of the world concurrently. |
| Summarising: | In short, Briefly. To put it briefly, his performance on stage was fantastic! |
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